‘Apathetically’ Short & Sweet (#6)
“Discuss the significance of the last line of “The Orange Tree””
The last line in John Shaw Neilson’s “The Orange Tree” holds weight, through its presentation of pure and raw emotion and something difficult to take literally.
However, through various re-reads I interpreted the combined rhetorical question and simile as a way to demonstrate the girls attempts to be unburdened, much like the tree. It seems to explore complex ideals of being overwhelmed within you’re life and the appeal to be apathetic in you’re own day to day existence.
Although throughout Neilson’s poem the tree is a constant symbol and sometimes important perpetrator of dialogue or actions, it doesn’t have any actual dialogue, it just remains a silent yet stoic figure throughout all of the key scenes within the poem.
This idea, is alluded to by the final “I.. Am Listening like the Orange Tree.”, this presents the notion that the Orange Tree has been watching and listening throughout the entirety of the story, and the emotive ‘longing’ placed on the final demands made by the girl present the idea that she wishes to be still and non responsive in her own life.
Requesting to not need to reply to the boy, not grow old, not confront her life, instead be a non-active participant – much like the tree. Almost as if she wishes to reach apathy, in her life.
This ending of idealised apathy is contrasted through the heavy emotion and colour throughout the piece, presenting an idealised landscape and atmosphere. Then ‘interrupted’ through rhetorical questions on the validity of beauty and the reality of beauty – alluding to it being based entirely on interpretation. This exploration finalised through the final line, as the girl begs for a silence similar to an Orange Tree.


